Original Post

Hello everyone, today you know the thing I would like to learn in my life. I'd like to learn another language, because I can understand and talk with different people and I knows their opinions, thinking and understand different ways of expression in different countries. One of my dreams is gains a France's language, for two reason. First I have family in this country, for this reason if I speak France I would talk them fluently and would not necessary to speak Spanish. Second reason I would like to travel in the future to France and to enjoy the trip and don't lose the time I have to understand the language and don't ask all the time for the meanings of places or expression. Also, is important to relate and knows the people. Learns France it's a difficult dream in appearance, but if I will attempt and to devote time and to practice the language I learn this in an relatively few time.

When I was a child I took piano lessons, but I didn't finish because I became interested in other things, for example football, volleyball and other sports. I changed the music for the sport. But now I think in a future I would like to take again piano lessons. Other thing I would like take again is the volleyball, because it's a very funny and beneficial sports.

Greetings to all.

Bye.

Corrected Version

Hello everyone, today you know the thing I would like to learn in my life. I'd like to learn another language, because I can understand and talk with different people (λ) (languages) (? M) And I knows (Know) (S/P) their opinions, thinking and understand (λ) the different ways of expression in different ( ) countries. One of my dreams is gains a (λ) course language French France’s (WF) language, (λ) because I have two reasons: for two reason. (WE). First I have family in this country, for this reason ( ) if I (λ) will can speak France I would talk (T) them fluently and would ( ) don’t necessary not necessary (WF) to speak Spanish. Second reason ( ) (P), I would like to ( ) travel in the future ( ) to France and to ( ) enjoy the trip. (P) ( λ) furthermore and ( ) I don't lose (WF) the time I have to  (WE) to try understand the language (λ) and don't ask ( )  all the time ( ) for the ( ) meanings of places (words) (WF) or expressions (SP). Also, is important to relate (WW) socialize and knows the people. Learns (S/P) France French (WF) it's a difficult dream in appearance, but if I will attempt and to (λ) convert devote time and ( ) (P) to, practice the language, I (λ) will learn this (P) in an relatively few time.

When I was a child I took piano lessons, but I didn't finish because I became (T) was interested in other things, for example football, volleyball and other sports. I changed (WT) the music for the sport. But (  ) Now , I think in a future ( )   would like to take again piano lessons (WO). Other thing I would like take (WF) again is the volleyball, because it's a very funny and beneficial sports (SP) sport

Greetings to all.

Bye.